the chart shows that although overweight population continued to be male-dominated in Australia over the past few decades,the gender gap had ultimately narrowed.范文原创自小站老师Alice. Hua字数 162 words雅思小作文高分表达compares the gender distribution rose merelyin four separate years shoo...
雅思小作文求范文
2018年6月30日雅思小作文范文：柱状图
2018年6月30日场的雅思小作文真题范文已出，小作文类型：柱状图。本期小作文题目是：The chart below shows the rate of males and females who were overweight in Australia from 1980 to 2010.
雅思小作文类型：Bar chart
雅思小作文范文解析
看到小作文，我们首先要定位3W(when, where, what),该柱状图描述的时间是过去的4个年份，跨度30年。地点为澳洲。内容为超重男女的比例。该题目内容一目了然，男性比率总高于女性，所以思路解答上可以男女分开，描述各自的变化趋势。范文共计8句话。
雅思小作文范文
The bar chart compares the gender distribution of overweight men and women in Australia in four separate years 1980, 1990, 2000 and 2010.
Across all the years, it is apparent that the proportion of males who were obese was significantly higher than that of their female counterparts. Initially, almost one half (48%) of the male tended to be excessively fat. This number rose merely by 4% in the following decade before shooting up and arriving at its peak at 69% in 2000. Subsequently, there was a marginally downward trend, ending up with 65%.
Similarly, the rate of females also showed an upward in the first two decades in spite of a relatively lower proportion (28%) occupied in 1980. This figure had consistently increased to 49% until 2000 and had remained stable by the end of the period.
In brief, the chart shows that although overweight population continued to be male-dominated in Australia over the past few decades,the gender gap had ultimately narrowed.
范文原创自小站老师Alice. Hua
字数 162 words
雅思小作文高分表达
compares the gender distribution rose merely
in four separate years shooting up and arriving at its peak at
it is apparent that a marginally downward trend
was significantly higher than Had consistently increased
female counterparts had remained stable
2018-07-23
雅思写作在雅思备考中是很重要的一部分。如何写好雅思小作文呢？那必须要有好的雅思备考攻略啊！刚好，本文就专门为大家带来五个忠告，针对小作文的，大家可以收藏起来以便随时查看。
准备好的雅思备考攻略，才有写好雅思小作文的本事。这里小编告诉带五个忠告，希望你们用心记住。能够为你们的雅思写作带来臂之力。
寻觅小作文需要学会去表达的重点
见到图形表达题，那么你心中就需要思考这个图形题需要表述的重点在哪里。作答的时候还要先说明再梳理数据。切不可将文章写成种账本式的文字，否则，你就只能得到个很低的分数。
二、了解图形的分类规律
图形描述题，需要去按照标准图形来分，般可以分为linegraph(curve),barchart,piechart以及table，你可以按照表达的重点来分，般可以分为趋势类和大小类，分类需要依据于题中的时间列表。般来说，出现时间段的图形题都是以描述数据变化趋势为主。
三、准备必要的表达方式
四、注重连词的使用
只有身怀雅思备考攻略，才能够在雅思考中脱颖而出。连词在语句中往往起着承上启下的作用，添加连词，不但可以增加文章的逻辑感，同时还会使得文章更加严谨，同时，文章中连词的使用也是需要去讲究定的形式，这些我们在文章中般称之为形连。
五、Integrity and Perfection
当这篇文章有了恰当的表达方式，还需要再去进行些细节方面的修饰，添加数据时，形式定要做到整齐划，增加连词的使用，还要去加强文章的严谨度，同时可以采用些多样化的数据添加方式，这样就能够使文章看起来有理有据，中心思想贯穿全文。
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网上有很多雅思作文范文，同学们在备考雅思写作部分的时候也很喜欢背诵范文，把这些范文套用到自己的写作当中，但是范文背得多，也不一定能帮助你得高分。
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